2023高考英语复习强基固本专题练: 短文改错 专项练习( 含解析)
高中英语 2023高考复习强基固本专题练
人教2019版必修二 短文改错 专项练习
1.假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下面画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
China and Western country may have different cultural beliefs about certain animals. But when it came to pigs, we somehow reach an agreement that pigs are lazy, ugly, stupidly and shameless. None of these words described pigs are exactly positive. Moreover, the truth is that pigs have some good qualities. And there’s probably no good time to clear their names than now, with the arrival of the Year of the Pig on Chinese Spring Festival, which fell February 5 this year. According to a paper publishing in 2017, pigs can tell between those who treat them well or those who don’t. Perhaps these are the qualities of pigs to keep it in mind— their intelligence, cuteness and patience.
2.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
We had a school trip on last Sunday. Hundreds of us students took part in it excited.
At 8:00 a.m., we set out for the top of Jiuhuang Mountain in high spirits. All the way we were chatting, singing and laughing, enjoyed the fresh air and the beautiful sceneries. When someone fall behind, others would come or offer help. About two hours later, we all reached the top. Seeing from there, the river below looked like a thin belt. We were such happy that we jumped and cheered with joy.
The activity benefited us a lot. Not only did we get close to nature, but also we relaxed myself. What wonderful time!
3.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(/)划掉。
修改:在错的词下面划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10 处,多者(从第11处起) 不计分。
Last Sunday, I visited to a forest park of our city with my friend Tom. It took us about twenty minutes to ride there. Upon arriving, we took a picture at the gate of a park first. Then we begin our trip. Breathed fresh air, we observed many kinds of trees, some of which we had never heard of before. In addition to plants, we also fascinated by strange stones and various public facility in the park. However, which attracted me most was the fountain in the middle of a lake. On our way back, all of us were very excited. But we're looking forward to enjoying the nature scenery again.
4.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号( ),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I am fond of wild animals, which existence makes our world lively and colorfully. However, many wild animals in nature are in the danger. It is believed that human beings mainly lead the terrible problem. Thanks to many governments’ and organizations’ efforts, much attention from the world are paid to the protection of wild animals. As a member of human beings, I am sure willing to protect the wildlife. So far, I had launched two activities to show the public the great achievements make in the protection of the wildlife. Many of my classmates have joined myself. I hope that more people can participate in the activity to advertise the importances and benefits of environment protection.
5.文中共有10处语言错误,请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;只允许修改10处,多者(从11处起)不计分。
Hello, everyone! I would like to share my travel experience for you. Last summer, ours school had an exchange programme with an American school, but I took part in it with many classmates. We stay at host families, that gave us an opportunity to learn more about America. The main part of our programme was to experience the school life in the pare with Chinese students, American students were very open and active. Besides, they had less homeworks and fewer exams. During the visit, I made friends with some American students, who were very interesting in Chinese culture. I think the programme is of great benefit to us as well the American students.
6.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
It was spring on March. With the comfortable weather and warmth sunshine, our class had a spring outing on Saturday. We gathered at the school gate, there the bus was waiting for us. We went to Renmin Park hold some activities and all of my classmate were so excited that they looked like the birds just coming out from birdcages. We playing games there and fished in the river. At the same time, we enjoyed the beautiful scenery of spring, but all of us were satisfied. Some people in the park also joined us and had a fun. We had a happier day and the relationship of classmates were getting closer.
7.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I went to Xiangshan Park in last week. At the gate I happened to meet some America tourists. I greeted him in English and then we begin to chat. I got to know that they were college students travel in China. They were busy with taking pictures and were much impressed by the changes had taken place in the past few years. After that, we visited Bei Jing hutong and had a good time. We exchanged our e-mail address so that we could write to each other on the future. I was very glad to have a chance to practice my speak English.
8.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号( ),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last year we went on an European culture tour. I, together with my friends, were looking forward to visiting the University of Greenwich. So we reached the River Thames on the first day. To our joys, we met with a couple of old professors who had been traveling around Britain a few days. We felt so excited which we couldn’t help sharing our travel experiences with them. We visited France and Italy with them and we also had a wonderfully picnic together. As we were expected, they planned to leaving first. We offered to help carry their packs to the airport and saw him off. They were grateful to us. What meaningful and impressive the trip was!
9.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用(\)划掉。
修改: 在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改l0处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Mobile phones are commonly using and play an important role in ours daily life. With their help, people mainly communicate and kept in contact with others in the past. But now things are total different. They allow people to have fun by watching short videos and play games. As a result of, a great many students of all age are addicted to mobile phones. And the overuse of mobile phones have distracted students from their study and caused disharmonious relationships between parents and children. Therefore, students are supposed have a positive attitude towards mobile phones but spend time properly on them.
10.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10 处语言错误,每句中最多有两处. 错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Friday will live in my memory forever. It was the first time when I had performed Latin dance with the classmate on stage.
After I changed into my suit, I stood quiet, waiting for our turn. While standing on stage, I am afraid of looking at the audience. Then the music began, but we started to dance. Concentrating in what I was doing, I began to feel better. Finally, it was over. As we left the stage, I said to my partner: “We did a good job.”
Not only I put on a show for others, I also learned why to deal with a challenge. Now when I face a new situation, I am not as nervous as I was before. I know I may practice and be ready for anything. It is a wonderful, free feeling to be able to perform it for others.
11.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
On graduation approaching, I can’t help consider my college major. As a science student, I show great interests in physics, so chances are that I will take physics as my major.
As far as I am concerned, physics plays essential part in the development of our country. Moreover, by majoring in physics, I cannot only satisfy my person interest but also contributed to the scientific and technical progress of China. Meanwhile, physics will be help me have a deeper understanding of what the world works, fostering my creativity and critical thinking ability.
Above all, to get fully prepared for my cream major, I must learn a lot of basically knowledge. Furthermore, I’ll try various ways to broad my view in physics and concentrate all my efforts on China’s development.
12.假定英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号 (∧), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线 (\) 划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者 (从第11处起) 不计分。
Dear Tom,
How is it going in the UK I was planning a trip to London with my parents next month.
As the matter of fact, I intend to travel to London so as experience different cultures, which might be helpful for me to broaden my horizons. Also, I am eager to improve my speaking English by communicating with foreigner. Most important, I will get a chance to meet you or enjoy a different lifestyle. Despite of good hopes, I have no idea that is worth visiting or how to behave properly. Could you introduce some places of interest and some customs to me
Looking forward to you early reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
13.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Yesterday was the four day of our end-of-year trip to Barcelona and we had the really wonderful day! My friend Chris and I go to see the BMX Big Air Final. The competition was really cool. The rider which won the gold medal was called Zack Warden and he was did a beautiful jump. We had seats nearby so we had a clear view of it. Lucky, Chris knew one of the competitors well, so they got to meet some of the riders after the competition! We even got the chance to talk to Zack Warden for a few minute. He was very friend to us! It was such a great day, so much fun! I can’t wait travel with Chris again!
14.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。 文中共有 10 处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。 每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用( \) 划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改 10 处,多者( 从第 11 处起) 不计分。
Poetry probably dates back tens of thousands of years ago, when writing had not been inventing. People would sit around the fire at night sang songs to entertain themselves, that reflected themes from the peoples daily lives. Since nothing was written down, over the years different versions of these songs developed and each area would have its own respectively rhythm. In an addition, people would recite stories of past hero. While in the beginning such songs and stories had very simple formats, over time it became more complicated and more polished. These were no longer the works of amateurs sitting around a fire, and works of true poets who cared about their art and sometimes makes a living from it.
15.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Thank you for your letter,for which it made me excited. I’m glad to know what you’ve come to China to learn Chinese kung fu in a school in my hometown. I’m sure about you’ll enjoy yourself. In fact, I begin to learn kung fu when I was seven years old, for I have long been out of practice. Luckily, I will go home for two weeks for summer holiday. Then I can spare some time to learn it again, such that we can practice together in every day. Best of luck with yours learning kung fu in China. See you sooner.
16.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
It was a Sunday afternoon. My parents and I were watching TV excited when suddenly I noticed the pigeon on the balcony. It was a white pigeon with a ring around one of its foot. It rested there quietly, refuse to fly away. Realizing it must have been lost its way back home, I managed call the Pigeon Association up for help. In the same time, my parents brought the pigeon inside and gave it some bird food, what helped refresh it. Before long, the owner got the message but came to take the pigeon back. He thanked us a lot. My parents and I both felt happy for what we had done.
17.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The moment we entered the Summer Palace yesterday, Tom and I attracted by its beautiful scenery, and we walked along the beautiful lake happy.
Soon, we noticed a elderly man practicing calligraphy on the ground, in a bucket of water aside. Hold a big writing brush in his hand, he wrote the Chinese character for “longevity”. We as well as other tourist couldn’t help but to admire his skills. To our surprised, the elderly man invited Tom to have a try. With her help, Tom completed his first calligraphy task, the two Chinese characters for “China”, quite successfully. Before we left, we take a photo together to memorize this valuable experience.
18.短文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The Xi’an Forest of Stone Tablets, initially set up in the 1087, was official named in the Qing Dynasty. It is an art treasure house where is composed of more than 3,000 stone tablets from the Han Dynasty through the Qing Dynasty. The museum is naming “Forest of Stone Tablets” because the numerous stone tablets housing in the museum look like a dense forest. The museum was a treasure house of ancient Chinese calligraphy as well as a good collection of historical documents and stone carvings in various styles. Moreover, the tablets bear evidences to the cultural exchanges in ancient China and show the great achievements of that period. However, for the visitors to Xi’an, the Forest of Stone Tablets is of great attraction in addition terracotta warriors. We will surely be impressed by its rich culture.
19.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
This summer, I went on trip with my best friend. We set out in the early morning. Two hours late, we got to the beautiful Mount Emei, why we talked to interesting monkeys and played with them. Though there were lots of stranger, they were not afraid. They were especially naughty, but very lovely. In noon, we tasted the delicious snacks though they were a little expensively. The next day, we fly to Beijing. We went to Tiananmen Square, the old Summer Palace ruins, the Imperial Palace or the Great Wall. Seen the beautiful scenery, we were astonished. How interesting the trip it was!
20.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Good tourist behavior is of great important for everyone. Cultural and natural sights belong to everyone, included the generations to come and good tourist behavior can help protect. Beside, good tourist behavior can make you have a more enjoy travelling experience. However, some tourists threw away rubbish everywhere. Some take photos which it's strictly forbidden. And others even write or draw anything on the tourist attraction.
It's not hard to give up such bad behavior as long as tourists realise it is harm to the sights. So firstly, the mass media have the responsibility of letting people to know what a good tourist is like. Secondly, tour guides should remind tourists local customs during the journey.
21.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The history of painting in China is long or full of masterpieces from different ages when have their own unique styles.
Truly artistic paintings other than calligraphy (书法) came into exist during the Qin Dynasty and matured in the Wei and Jin periods. It were in the Tang Dynasty that it developed more quicklier than any other previous period. An art continued to advance during the Song and Yuan Dynasties with an increased focus such subjects as mountains and animals. Traditional painting techniques lasted until the end of the Qing Dynasty, when modern painting techniques started off to challenge the traditional one. Although modern paintings had been heavily influenced by the West, they still value traditional painting techniques.
22.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的次。
删除:把多余的用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I'm delighted to know you showed a great interest in Chinese table manners. Now I would like to share you how to behave properly when inviting to dinner.
To begin with, the host will reserve a special seat for the guest, that is highly honored on such a occasion and is expected to be the first to taste the food served. Beside, chopsticks and spoons are usually used when you are eating in China. Third, you are not supposed to make a noise while drink soup. Last but not least, remember to thank the host for the delicious food he has been offered, which will surely make him happily.
I hope my advices will be of help to you.
23.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Hello, everyone, it is a honor for me to show you around Dujiangyan in tomorrow. To help you have a knowledge of it, I’d like to make a briefly introduction. Dujiangyan, with a long history of over 2000 year, is an ancient system locating in the Chengdu Plain, Sichuan Province. Once the plain is often flooded by the Min River, that rushed down from the Min Mountains. Therefore, Li Bing, one of the governors for the state of Qin, together with their son, began the building of Dujiangyan. It not only acted as a way prevent flood but a kind of transportation. Now it is list as a World Heritage Site as well as a five-A tourist attraction.
24.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
While traveling in England, my friend and I met a nice and young man calling Alain. In the days before the Internet and social media, it was common to exchange address upon departing and say, “Come and visit if you’re in an area.” So, two days later, we actual accepted his offer. We knocked on his door, just thinking about we’d have a cup of tea and a nice chat. And to our surprise, his lovely mum cooked a delicious dinner for ourselves! Then, we invited to stay the night! We had fun trying to speak French with his wife, which couldn’t speak English. It was an interested evening.
25.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Today, I’d like introduce our website to you. In this rapid changing world, the best way to get ahead in any career is to learn a new language. Learning a new language normally take years, but recent studies have found a more effective way of learning a new paring with traditional methods, having conversations can help with a person master a language more quickly. Our website provides users with over 1,000 videos, that have short everyday conversation in English between native English speakers. The biggest advantage of our website is that we offer the wide range of video conversations on various topics, included Politics, Computers, Clothing and Learning a Foreign Language. They are both free. So what are you waiting for?
26.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Digital life has brought great changes to us. With a smart phone in hand, I can do almost nothing. Just name a few on the list—learning online, getting medical service on the Internet and shop with a click. I can even travel across China without taking cashes!
As a young student, I surely enjoyed living in such a digital world. It gives me an easy access to abundant resources, news and learning materials alike. If only I wish, it offer the chance to better myself, physically or mentally. Therefore, the digital life also has their downsides. Many elderly Chinese feel leave behind. So I often try to help those need.
27.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧) ,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
With the popularity of cellphones and Internet, some of we students spend too much playing with cellphones or computer games, which is bad for our studies. Worse is still, we have little time to communicating with our parents and friends. So do we have time for physical exercises.
How shall we do to improve the situation All of us should realize the negative effects of modern media. Let's limit our time to playing with cellphones or computer games. Instead we should spend more time playing sports or talking straightly with our parents and friends, which helped us relax and communicate.
28.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下而写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
After I graduated junior high school, my parents took me to Thailand. It had become my most unforgettable trip ever since. I enjoyed all kind of fresh fruits and seafoods, which were such delicious that I was unwilling to go home. When going for sightseeing, I saw the beautiful sunset on the beach but met many local people. They could speak fluent Chinese and English, which made me amazing. This trip not only taught me a lot of knowledges that I had never learned in books, but opened our eyes to a new world. As the saying goes, “It’s good to travel ten thousand miles than to read ten thousand books.”
29.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中 共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I still remember my last summer holiday where I visited Washington State with Tom. We went camp in the forest. It was a little of cold but in October the season brought lots of differently colors to the trees. Everything looks just beautiful. Later, we saw the snowy mountains and began to drive at foot of the mountains and finally they arrived in the desert. It was a sunny day and the scenery were beautiful. I loved walking along the country roads here, with trees on both sides. I also had a pleasant time with my friends in a restaurant.
30.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换改作文,请为你的同桌修改以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处下加一个漏子符号(/\),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误仅限1词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Jackie,
The school holidays are drawing to near. I feel very exciting at the thought that I am going to visit America in the holidays. It’s the first time for me to travel abroad on my own, so I need your helping.
I’d like to visit some areas of scenic beauty, such for mountains, rivers or forests, which I could enjoy the beauty of nature. Could you suggest several place for me to visit Beside, I prefer to live in peace and I hoped the traffic isn’t too heavy. Perhaps you could help me book hotel.
I’m expecting to hear from you, and I’m looking forward to meet you in America.
Yours,
Lihua
31.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
It is known to us, a large number of wild animals has been killed for their meat. As result, thousands of animals have either died out and become endangered.
Actually, protect wild animals benefits the animals as well as humans. For example, if farmers killed too many eagles, their corn and grain would be destroyed for rats. The reason is because with no eagles to hunt rats, their number would increase rapid.
Therefore, all of us must do what they can to protect wild animals. As for me, I have joined an organization in our town which aim is to call on people to protect wild animals and I have taken part in several activities.
32.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词:
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month. It is in the downtown area, but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport. We lived in a comfortably double-room with big bath. What I liked best were the free high-speed Internet connection in the room. I checked my e-mail messages every day. I also shared with my friends many photos taking in Beijing. The food was wonderful with reasonable prices, and they enjoyed several local dish.
It is so a great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend who is going to Beijing.
33.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
This Monday afternoon we had a class meeting. Our head teacher ask us to talk about our study plans in the coming college entrance examination. It was really a heating discussion. Everybody took an actively part in it. Some students say they will focus more in class instead of being absent-mind now and then. Some say they will be more organized and have much self-control, for time is so limited but pressing. Others say they will keep an eye on past mistake made in their test papers because they can’t afford to repeat them again. As for me, I will do what I can make my dream come true.
34.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文,文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear John,
Thank you for your warmly reception during my stay in the USA.Although I have been come back, I will never forget your concern for me.
Now I hope you can take care for yourself. First and foremost, don’t always stay up late, what would be harmful to your health. Besides, whenever you have trouble learn Chinese, you can write to me but I will try my best to help you. What’s more, if you had free time, I’d like to invite you pay a visit to China. Then I’ll be your guide and accompany me to enjoy the wonderful trips.
I’m looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
35.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有三处。错误涉及一个单词的增加,删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear editor,
I’m sorry to occupy your precious time, and I really want to tell you anything about the problem of some people keeping too many pets nowadays. I take the problem more and more seriously for the following reasons. First of all, as it is known to people, pets make so much noise that trouble residents a lot. What’s more, it is widely accepted that animal waste pollute the environment, which makes people quite uncomfortable. Many owners like taking his pets to public places where they may frighten children or even bite people. The mostly important is that pets can spread some diseases and this has attracted many attention. Take all these factors into consideration, I sincerely hope that I can get help from you and expect the media do something for this.
Yours truly,
Wang Lin
36.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号( ),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用(/)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
To enrich students school life and help us learn more about space exploration, our school organized a visit to the City Museum on the other day.
At the beginning, some pictures and videos about space exploration were shown to them. By watching them, we learned a lot about many great achievement that had been made in our country. The astronauts’ devotion to the space exploration of our country leaves a deep impression on us. Afterwards, we experienced a life and work of astronauts, like how they do in our space station. All the teachers and students were very excited, try and touching everything.
Such a great success the activity that it was highly spoken of. Hopeful, there will be even more activities like this.
37.下面短文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处. 错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.
增加: 在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在此符号下面写出该加的词.
删除: 把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
One Saturday afternoon, Li Hua and Wang Ping was having an environmental protection activity near the rivers when they catch sight of a bird on the ground. They picked it out and found it wounded. Thinking it might die without timely help, they took it to home. They made a nest for it but fed it with rice and water. Under their treatment and care, the lucky birds got recovered soon. When time came for them fly the bird back to nature, they felt a bit pity but very delighting. I think it`s worthwhile for him to do such a thing. Here I call on the public to show respect to nature. Only by changing the way we treat the environment can we get along good with it.
38.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏子符号(∧)并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词:
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
It is perhaps the most performed song in the world. A birthday party wouldn’t be complete with participants joyously sing out the song around a big birthday cake. Yet “Happy Birthday to You” is privately property and protected under copyright.
It is fine when you sing it by yourself. But if someone wants to do them in movies or TV shows or in any other commercial activities, they need to pay the Warner Music Group for a right. According with a report, “Happy Birthday to You” is believing to be netting the company $2 million a year in fees, this could soon be changed.
39.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
I’m sorry to say that I can’t go to Wuzhen with you as planning. I’m writing to apologize for breaking my promise. I had been expecting to visit Wuzhen with you, where we can get close to the nature and experience local customs. However, I can’t travel recent because I hurt my leg in an accident. That is because I think it is a good choice for us to put away our travel. I will appreciate if you could allow me to fix another date. If it’s convenience for you, shall we travel there during the summer vacations If not, please keep me informed of what time suited you best in advance.
40.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Online shopping is one part of our life for nowadays. There is no doubt that online shopping makes it easy for us select and purchase goods. It is especially convenient for people which are always busy with their work or study. Beside, we can find anything we want at the much lower price. However, many problems appeared along with it. Firstly, we cannot tell whether the quality, size, or color is satisfied until we receive the goods. If not, we have to mail it back and wait for long days to get them change. What’s more, it is a big challenge to ensure the safe of online trading.
41.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏子符号(∧),并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词:
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Today I met with a little dog seemed to run to me on purpose. I stopped in time to avoid hitting the dog.
Luckily, it was not injuring, but lay on the ground. I came nearer and touched at its side gently. It jumped to its foot quickly and stared at me kindly. Seeing nothing seriously, I was about to leave when the dog stops me by biting my trousers. So I wanted to take the dog away but that I did was unfair for its master. Just then, the woman came, saying that the dog was hers. But she said I can take it away as she had some many dogs at home. Thus I got a lovely pet.
42.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删减:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错词下面划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The summer holiday is coming. I’d like have lunch with Ren Zhengfei, president of the well-known Chinese tech company Huawei.
Mr. Ren was considered as a great man who always has everything mapped out ahead. And under him leadership, Huawei have become a high-tech giant worldwide. I will take him to Bailu restaurant although the food there is the most delicious in our city. In a meantime, I will listen to his story. Then I will ask him what is importance to make it happen today. Time permitted, I’ll ask for his advices for us teenagers.
I’m expecting for this lunch already.
43.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Lily,
I’m glad to hear that you’ll visit China this summer vacation! Knowing that you’re amazing at traditional China, I’d like to recommend my most favourite city, Suzhou to you.
Suzhou, referring as the Venice of the East, is an attractively city located in the southeast of Jiangsu Province. It had been listed by UNESCO as a world cultural heritage. The Classical Gardens are the symbol of the city, there you can have better understanding of China. Because these gardens are not large, they’re unique to their designs. It bring together the beauty of nature, architecture and painting.
I believe you will enjoy your time in Suzhou.
Yours,
Lihua
44.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
One of the best example of Internet success in Malaysia is Harris. Over the course of his life, he has spent most of his spare time in school translated documents online, that has brought him a lot of money. I never thought that such thing was possible. When he was just 17 years old, he decided to start translating documents for American companies on the Internet. In the beginning, he did things on a relative small size and focused in his studies. But as his time went by, he got more and more jobs. By being patience and hard-working, Harris had managed to find more websites that provide listings of hundreds of available jobs so far.
45.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。作文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My parents and I spent five days in Beijing last year. We went to there in autumn. We think it is best season to visit Beijing. The weather is usually cool or there aren't too many tourist in October. We stayed in a hotel in the center of the city. It was conveniently as we travelled most on foot. We couldn't understand the bus routes, and my parents didn't enjoy travelled by underground. We both went shopping in Wangfujing Street and spend too much money. What we liked most were going to the theater. We don't have the chance to see so wonderful plays at home.
46.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加﹑删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Hello, everyone. I am Emily in China. I feel very lucky to be able to study in this famous university, which has the most prettiest campus I has ever seen.
I enjoyed dance with my parents very much when I was still child. I started studying ballet at the age of six. By the time I was nine, I had to dance three day a week.
Earlier this year, I apply for this training program and I just moved there last week. I hope that I can graduate from this school successful. I will be very happy if I can became a dancer in the future.
47.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Online learning has become an important way to learn recently. However, online learning has all advantages and disadvantages. Its advantages are obvious. It allows us learn at any time wherever we are. Besides, it is much more easier for us to absorb resources who are available online. However, its disadvantages cannot be ignoring. Staring at the screen for a long time is harmful to us eyes. Worse still, we don’t have much opportunities to interact with teachers and classmates. Then how to be smart online learners First, we should discussing problems with others courageously. Second, it is wisely to take a short break after learning for half an hour. On conclusion, only by being smart online learners can we truly enjoy the benefits of modern technology.
48.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共 有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧ ),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Thursday was the day where I paid a visit for the museum of tea together with some foreign students and showed them around there.
I led them to look through the items about tea at the exhibition in beginning. They were curious about the stories behind those old mysteriously things. Then I showed them what to make tea. Later, they tried making tea by them. At the end of the activity, we had a photo was taken together. Exhausted and delighted , they expressed their gratefulness to me for my explain.
The activity impressed me deeply because it allow me to know more about our traditional culture that day. I enjoyed it very much.
49.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Sunday, Tom and I paid the visit to Neijiang. We began by touring Daqian Museum, where is located by the beautiful Tuojiang River. Since I was born and brought up in Neijiang, so I acted as his tour guides. For lunch, we tried some special Neijiang noodles. Tom spoke high of Neijiang beef noodles. After lunch, I suggested Tom boats in the Tuojiang River. When we decided leave, the traditional paper cutting catch our eyes. Tom bought some paper cuts as souvenirs. Tiredly, we got back to the hotel. What a wonderful day!
This experience with him undoubtedly improved our friendship. On fact, I began to realize that as Chinese, we should appreciate our own culture so as to make these treasures last forever.
50.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号( ),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
How is it going This weekend our class are going to visit Yuntai Mountain, locating in Jiaozuo. I’m writing to invite you join us.
We’ll meet at our school gate at 7:00 and sets off at 7:20 by bus. Being active in Saturday morning, my classmates hope to climb Zhuyu Peak. Next some students may feel tiring, so we’d like to travel through the Red Rock Valley that afternoon, and play game at night. After seeing the waterfall on Sunday morning, we’ll retum back. While traveling, everyone shouldn’t go to danger places, and it’s our duty to protect the environment.
Because we need to book hotel accommodations in advance, I want to make sure of the number of the students which will go to visit. Please tell me whether you’d like to go or not.
I’m expecting to receiving your early reply.
51.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
After I graduated from junior high school, my parents and I go to Thailand for a trip. It was my the most unforgettable trip. I enjoyed so delicious fresh fruit and seafood that I was unwilling go home. While going for sightseeing, I saw the beautiful sunset on the beach and met much local people. They could speak fluently Chinese and English, which made me surprising. This trip not only taught me a lot of knowledge who I had never learned in books, but opened your eyes to a new world. As the saying goes, “It's nice to travel ten thousand miles than to read ten thousand books.”
52.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误, 每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下面画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last summer I paid a visit Tianchi, which is a lake on top of Changbaishan. The road lead to it is so steep that visitors need some equipments to help them walk. When I got there, I was rewarded not only with the beautiful view and also interesting stories about it. The most famous one concern three young women from heaven. They were bathing in Tiaichi while a bird dropped a small fruit into the mouth of the youngest girl. Having been swallowed the fruit, the girl became pregnant and gave birth to a boy, which is said to be the father of the Manchu people. The water of Tianchi is very clear that you will forget your anxious when standing by it.
53.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
With the Spring Festival come, there will be a long winter holiday. Therefore, I am not going to travel anywhere, because of I don’t want to join the crowds. Instead, I just want to stay at home and enjoyed the family time. I am so delightedly that my grandparents will come to stay with us for few days. So my parents decide to having a family hotpot and invite some relatives together. It is so a great reunion that everyone will have much fun. What’s more, we will drive to our hometown, what is near the city center. There will be fewer people and we can appreciate the beauty of natures.
54.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下信件内容。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划—横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Recently, a famous basketball player has caused public angry by writing on the Great Wall. In the fact, this happens in many place of interest. I had some suggestions to solve this problem. First, make more posters to inform the public the damage of graffiti (涂鸦). Besides, punishments, such as a fine, is necessary to tourists with so bad behaviors. Also, I think it’s helpfully to put up some boards along the tourist attractions that tourists can leave messages. I’m sure with our efforts, more and more people will become concerning about protecting cultural relics.
55.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Saturday afternoon we take part in a voluntary activity called “Clean Home”, which was organizing by our school. We got to the People’s Square in our town but then handed out leaflets to passers-by to remind them of the importance of protect the environment and cleaning their homes. The leaflets were used to calling on people to start with ourselves. Some students made out public speeches to tell people to take action immediate. All of us really learned lot from the voluntary activity and it offered us an opportunity to make some differences to the society.
56.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下短文。短文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起) 不计分。
When George arrived in San Francisco, he went straightly to the hotel and drop his luggage. Then, he went explore in the city. The first thing was the ride on a cable car. He reached the top of the hill, from which he got a spectacular view of San Francisco Bay and the city. Built in 1873, the cable car system was invented by Andrew Hallidie, who wanted to find a better mean of transport than horse-draw trams. Apparent, he was shocked when he saw a terrible accident, which a tram slipped down the hill dragging the horses with it. With so much exploring, he returned back to the hotel, exhausted but happy.
57.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Our school held a show called “Us After Ten Years ”, when the speakers presented their future careers. I chose to be the diplomat (外交官). I’d like to present myself as a true spokes-person, either gentle like Wang Wenbin nor sharp like Zhao Lijian. Waiting my turn, I paced backstage with my heart beating wildly. Then comes my turn. I took a deep breath and walked onto the stage, waved to the audience. The bright lights and screams were surrounded me tightly. Fortunate, everything went smoothly. The heavy burden changed into a sense of pride. I’ m proud of me and Chinese diplomats, who meet challenge every day but manage to keep showing Chinese wisdom.
58.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号( ),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
As we are spending more and more time online, both our teachers or parents are increasingly worried about the possibly side effects of the Internet.
But increased use of the Internet is not necessarily good or worse. It becomes unhealthy only when it starts replacing with such important things as physical activities and avoiding friends and families. If our schools and families only focus the amount of screen time, they’re concentrating on the wrong things. What matters are how we spend our time online. Actually, spending more time online may be beneficial for them if we can use the Internet properly. We can learn such things as search for important information and communicating with different persons, who are very important life skills in the future.
59.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I was happy that I took guided tour of the Summer Palace on Sunday with my classmates and teachers. We go there by coach. The scenery was too beautiful that we took a great number of picture there. Then we walked around the lake, listen to the guide talking about the history of it. The Summer Palace was special designed. After three hours, we were hungry so we ate and drank that we brought with us. We were soon full with energy. We decided to climb the Longevity Hill. We all felt delightedly when we were on the top of it. Although we were tired, but we really had a good time.
60.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加个漏字符号(/\),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
One morning, I was walking toward the garage, yawning sleepy. There was an animal that fur was as white as snow climbed up and down the fence. I woke up right away. To my surprise, there were two cats. I found out cats were from two cat families. Sometime, the cat parents fought for the living space while the cats from both families chase after each other and sunbathed. Thanks for a group of enthusiasts who provide food and shelter for those cats, so they can live happily and bring people happiness. I still like to see it around, especially when I’m tiring with a lot of schoolwork.
61.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Jim,
Knowing that you are interesting in China's "four great new inventions", I'd like to brief introduce one of them to you—high-speed rail. China's high-speed trains ran at a speed of 250—350 km per hour. The country's advanced transportation network has surprised at the world.
Since it takes only a little hours to travel from north China to south China, high-speed rail has given the public a convenient transport alternative. It has also attracted globe attention. As the result, many countries have imported Chinese high-speed rail technology to upgrade them own rail transport systems. I hope that the above informations will be helpful to you. If you have any further questions, please do not hesitate contact me.
Yours,
Li Hua
62.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I admire a cellist Yo-Yo MA.Born in Paris, France, in 1955, Ma started playing the cello the age of four. When he was seven, he moved with their family to New York. He attended a music school, and then that he studied at Harvard University. Ma performed such professionally while studying that he started to become famously. Ma dreamed of connecting people around the world through music. And in 1998, he found an organization called the Silk Road Project, through what Ma gave cross-cultural music performances with musicians from places like Iran, Mongolia and Italy. Through his work, Ma has helped people all over the world learning to appreciate various type of music.
63.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
As one of the most popular short-video platforms in China, Kuaishou had gained millions of users and children are also including. As we all know, spending too much time watch short videos or playing online games is not good for the young. However, the app appeals to the public to ensure children register with our own identities. In this way, the app can limit the time and help the young use it more proper. It is believed what this policy will be great benefit to those who are underage. Also, the young may get knowledges from the app to improve themselves. Every coin has the two sides. Some youngsters argue this policy may lead to the leak of their privacy.
64.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2、只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I have an eBook reader, and I advise you buy one. I thought eBook readers are very helpful for students. Reading an eBook is just like reading a traditional book without have to hold the book or turn the pages. Before eBook readers, students had to carry heavy books with us each day. However, eBook readers are very lightweight and usual weigh less than a pound. They are comfortable to hold and are clear even at bright sunshine. Beside, buying a new book for an eBook reader is simple and cheap. There are now million of ebooks to choose from, and many eBooks are cost less than traditional books. This is clear that eBook readers have certainly made students’ life much easier.
65.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Tom,
I am writing to share with you one of my favorite Chinese folk dance, the peacock dance (孔雀舞) of the Dai people, who are known as their dancing skills. It is said that about a thousand years ago, when the Dai minority learned to dance through copying the elegant gestures of the peacock, which is a symbol of happiness. The dance movements are usually performed in fixed o